Monday, June 14, 2010

Oh ..It is a Poetry!!

Raining…raining...

Raining over the fallen branches..

Raining over the withered petals..

Raining over the downtrodden grass tips..

Raining over the suppressed thoughts


Swinging…swinging..

Rain drops are swinging..

Swinging over the haunting thoughts..

Swinging over the hopeless aims..

Swinging over the shattered Dreams…


Singing …singing..

Loneliness is singing..

Sorrowful sighs are singing..

Gloomy thoughts are singing..

Abandoned Hopes are singing..

Oh ..It is a Poetry!!

40 comments:

Anna said...

Joy very good start with your blog, like the poem. BTW thanks so much for commenting on my Story Blob. Anna :)

Shrinky said...

Welcome to blogland! I love the rhythm to this, and how you liken nature to mood - I look forward to reading more from you.

poetsforpeanuts said...

Very pretty, I hope you continue to post! "Swinging over the hopeless aims..." Nice!

Robyn said...

Welcome to the land of many blogs :)

Yes it is a poetry...

lovely to meet you and I hope you will enjoy creating and sharing

best wishes
Robyn

Robyn said...

PS... i like the template you have chosen... very nice.

may I suggest that you remove word verification if you would like more comments as people generally don't stop for long.... just a thought

Angela said...

Welcome from Germany, too, and thank you for coming to my blog! I like your poetry, give us more! Angela

Indrani said...

Great post to start with.
Wish you all the best.

Rebecca said...

Beautiful.

Joy Palakkal said...

Anna....
Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Thanks for your comment and first visit.

Shrinky..
Thanks for your warm welcome.. and the comment.

poetsforpeanuts..

Thanks for your visit and comment on Palakkal Arena.

faery of the wilds said...

I miss the monsoons... cute poem

Joy Palakkal said...

Robyn..
Hearty Welcome to My blog!!!
Thanks for your appreciation Of my Blog template and Poetry .
As you suggested I removed the word verification.

Angela..
Thanks for your visit from Germany..and appreciation of my poetry too.

Indrani...
hearty Welcome..
Thanks for your first visit to Palakkal Arena.

Rebecca..
Warm Welcome to my Blog..
Thanks for your first visit and comment.

Joy Palakkal said...

faery of the wilds..
Glad to welcome you to my blog world...
Thanks for your first visit and comment.

Keats The Sunshine Girl said...

Great start! Welcome to blogging!Thanks for coming by my blog.

Joanna Jenkins said...

Welcome to blogging. I hope you enjoy it. This is a terrific start!
jj

Joy Palakkal said...

Keats The Sunshine Girl..

Hearty Welcome to my Blog..
Thanks for your visit and comment.

Joanna Jenkins..
Warm Welcome..
Thanks for your first visit and comment..

David C Brown said...

Thanks for your comment on my blog; glad for any visitors from my beloved India! And I hope the rains have come! (Never a special wish here).

Keep singing: "a poetry"; great!

Diva Lali said...

Congratulations.
I look forward to the next.

Kisses

Amy Saia said...

That's really pretty. I relate to this poem so very much. I hope you post more!

Heather P said...

Beautiful, Joy! I'm looking forward to reading your blog regularly!

Lisa Hazarika said...

Raining..swinging..singing..nice piece of poetry..I love raindrops..Do add some more..

jmartha said...

thank you for coming and joining my blog Joy.. you got a beatiful Poem at ur place :) good luck in everything you do, Regards, J. Martha

Joy Palakkal said...

David C Brown..
Welcome To My Blog..
Thanks for your first and comment..
Do visit again..

Diva Lali..
Thanks for first visit and appreciation..

belovely said...

Hi there,
Thanks for following my bikram blog! Hope you enjoy the posts, and feel free to share if with friends and family or those you know who are interested in yoga. Just out of curiosity, how did you find my blog?
Happy reading,
Rachel

Joy Palakkal said...

Amy Saia..
Thanks for your first visit.
And appreciation ..
Welcome again..

Heather P..
Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for your visit and appreciation of Poetry..
Do visit again..

Lisa Hazarika,,
Hearty Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for Your Visit and apprecition of my Poem..
Come again..

Joy Palakkal said...

jmartha..
Welcome to My Blog..
Thanks For your First Visit and appreciation of my Writings..
Wish You all the Best...

Belovely...
Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for your First Visit..
and For appreciation too....
i Got your Blog through Yoga's interest..Sure i will share it with my friends and Family..
Wish you All the Best..

Daniel Dragomirescu said...

Excellent. By all means, go ahead, dear poet!
Daniel D. Peaceman, editor of CHMagazine
..And if you wish, you may send us a selection from your poetic creation, to publish in a future issue of international and multicultural CHMagazine
Best!
DDP

Readers Dais said...

good one ,it has music in it :)

anupama said...

Dear Joy,
It's raining since many days!
The cool refreshing droplets,
Always my favourite theme for writing,
I am happy you have penned the moods,
Of the pitter-patter raindrops!
You could relate well to the moods of us!
Sitting near a window,I can enjoy the showers!
Wishing you a lovely holiday,
Sasneham,
Anu

Joy Palakkal said...

Daniel Dragomirescu...
Hearty Welcome to My Blog ..
Thanks For Your appreciation and inspiring Offer..i will send you my creation.
With All Best regard..
Do visit again..

Readers Dais...

Welcome to My Blog ..
Thanks For your first visit..
Come again..

Anupama..
Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Thanks For Your inspiring appreciation..Glad to know that you like showers...
Do visit again..
Sasneham...

Laura in Paris said...

Welcome to the blogosphere ...
I am making chicken curry today for friends who're coming for dinner .. a recipe I learned in Kenya with Indian friends! Hope it will be a success!

Joy Palakkal said...

Laura in Paris..

Hearty Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Thanks For your visit and Comment.And Indian Chicken curry..
Expecting your visit again ...

StaticMadness said...

very good poetry, thanks for reading my blog! Yes..summer has just started and oh....God is working :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Static Madness..
Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for visit and comment.
Now I am Living in a Desert..
Summer really so hard here.

Monique Finley said...

It's always refreshing to meet people with an interest in literature, especially poetry. Keep it up!

Uneven Stephen said...

Nice! I particularly like the line "Swinging over the haunting thoughts." Thanks for visiting Fractured Phrases. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Joy Palakkal ജോയ്‌ പാലക്കല്‍ said...

Monique Finley..

Hearty Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Thanks For your visit and Comment.
Expecting your visit again ...

Yamini said...

good one, especially the way u ended. :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Uneven Stephen..
Thanks for your Visit and the detailed appreciation you have written..
Do visit again ..Have a Nice Time!!

Joy Palakkal said...

Yamini..
Thanks for your Visit and appreciation...
Come again and mark your valuable comments..

ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം Muralee Mukundan said...

Swinging over the hopeless aims..

Swinging over the shattered Dreams…