Thursday, July 22, 2010

Love!!!







I was trying to study the true love...

I wandered through the books and books...

I wandered through out the life…

But I failed to find it out …

At last I realized it …

If I wanted to study the real love …

I have to experience the real love!!!


Then I started to love her sincerely…

I tried to love her perfectly…

……………………………….

But she advised me...

Go back and study love properly, if I need her love ….


Again I wandered and wandered….

From places to places...

From forests to forests of books…

At last I have studied the love properly!!!

I have studied the true love completely and perfectly!!

But when I returned …

She was in another love!!!

44 comments:

[Dani] said...

Thank you for the follow, Joy!

Joy Palakkal said...

Dani..
Welcome to Palakkal arena.
Thanks For your visit.

Lisa Hazarika said...

True love rarely comes our way but when it does,it stays on for a lifetime..It is how life is..Keep posting :)

Sabi Sunshine said...

thank You for your visit at my blog. I love your poetry about love. You have a unique way of writing.

God Bless
LOve
Sunshine

Anna said...

Joy Palakkal this was the cutest poem about love I ever read. Thanks for sharing, and for smiles, even if this was sad ending. Anna :) PS thanks for your visits, appreciated a lot.

Shrinky said...

Ha! How fickle this lady-love was (smile).. the poor man deserved better. What a tongue-in-cheek, playful poem, thank you for the read (and for the visit).

Joy Palakkal said...

Lisa Hazarika..
True love rarely comes our way but when it does,it stays on for a lifetime...
You are right..
Thanks for Visit and Appreciation..
Do visit again.

Joy Palakkal said...

Sabi Sunshine...
Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Thanks for your visit and appreciation..
Do visit again.

Joy Palakkal said...

Anna..
Thanks for your visit and Appreciation.
Expecting your Valuable Comments in Future also.

Shrinky..
Thanks for your encouraging comment.
Expecting your visit and comments again.

His Path Through The Wilderness said...

Wonderful insight!

Joanna Jenkins said...

Love can be tricky sometimes.

Thanks for stopping by my blog. It's nice to meet you. You have a wonderful way with words. I'll be back again soon.

jj

Sabi Sunshine said...

Hello dear just stopping by to say Hello waiing for your new post!

Have a wonderful week !

love
sunshine

Cami said...

Unfortunately, sometimes when true love comes, it is one sided. Having been on both ends, I found your poem sad, but true. I liked your poem. It was like reading a book with a surprise ending. :-)

Joy Palakkal said...

His Path Through...
Hearty Welcome to Palakkal Arena!!
Thanks for your visit and Comment.
Do visit again.

Joy Palakkal said...

Joanna Jenkins...
Thanks For Your visit and appreciation.
Thanks..see you again

Rajesh said...

Beautiful.

David C Brown said...

You have to learn the true love in company!

Joy Palakkal said...

Sabi Sunshine..
Thanks for your second Visit.
Wishing a Happy week end!!

Cami..
Warm Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for your Visit & appreciation..
Come again..

Anna said...

Joy hope all is well. Enjoyed reading your poem again. Just dropping by to thank you for all your kind visits. Anna :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Anna...
Thanks for Your Visit again..
Wish you happy week End..

Indrani said...

How sad!
Well she didn't deserve you!

Joy Palakkal said...

Indrani..
Thanks For Your Visit And Comment.
Come again..

ibarradas21 said...

Beautiful!

Debra W said...

So bittersweet and painful. Your writing is very good.

Thank you for stopping by my blog and for signing up to follow me! I appreciate it!

Joy Palakkal said...

ibrradas21...
Thanks For your first visit and appreciation ..
Do visit again..

Joy Palakkal said...

Debra W..
Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for your first visit appreciation of my poetry..

Expecting your visits and valuable comments again.

Anna said...

Just dropping by to thank you for your visits to my blog. Appreciated. Have a good weekend. Anna :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Anna..
Thanks for your visit.
Have a Nice week end!!

The Seeker said...

A very interesting poem.... the language of the poem does what the language itself says.
Love exists comfortably, naturally, easily however sometimes within numerous limits and boundaries...

Now I want to read more :)

Thank you so much for dropping by my blog and left such nice note, and also for following.

Keep in touch if you feel like it.

Best wishes ;)

Joy Palakkal said...

The Seeker..
Warm Welcome to Palakkal Arena..
Thanks for your visit and very inspiring comment.
It is Happy to be in touch with you.

Texan in UAE said...

wow, very deep! i can't wait to read more of your blog. :)))

Joy Palakkal said...

Texan UAE..
Hearty Welcome to Palakkal Arena.
Happy to receive your appreciation.
expecting your creative comments again.

Sannuuu...! said...

Joy....so simple n cute poem...!

advised - adviced is corct na...?

I always get confused, whyle typng...pls chk it.

Yamini said...

Chauvinistic, isn't it? :)

Smita said...

Very Nice

Rajasree Narayanan said...

she was in another love" ...nice line...keep it up !!

p_dhiman7 said...

Do not give your heart to those who do not deserve close you

Joy Palakkal said...

Sannuuu..!.

Thanks for your visit and comment..
"advice" is correct and "advised" also correct...
Come again and mark your valuable comments..

Joy Palakkal said...

Yamini..
Thanks For your Visit and comment...
Do visit again..Always welcome to Palakkal Arena..

Joy Palakkal said...

Smita..
Thanks For Your Visit and appreciation..
Come again..

Joy Palakkal said...

Rajasree Narayanan..

Thank You Rajasree..
Do visit again..and mark your comments..

Joy Palakkal said...

p_dhiman7...
Thanks For Your Visit..
and the Comment..Come again..

ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം Muralee Mukundan said...

Nice ...!

Shilpa Chandrasekheran said...

Excellent