Saturday, September 25, 2010

Utopian peak










Faces are mere illusions of disguised reality

Words are expressing the hypocritical intonations...

Body following the pretension of doomed faith...

Ideas are linking with selfish thoughts only!!

Promises are simple magic ovens...

Where the real needs getting frying up!!

As the great poet confesses that we are really hollow men…

Still we are claiming that we are developing race!!


We proudly discovered water in cosmic bodies...

But not enough water for thirsty human race

We are exploding the mysteries of unwanted technologies...

Where the human races are perishing with fatal diseases

Democracies growing purely out of public needs…

Religions are going away from fundamental truth…

For world peace we are brutally killing innocent children...

Still we are claiming that we are developing race!!!


Now we fear even the helping hands …

Might be a chance of blood sucking dagger inside the sleeves…

We can’t appreciate the Beauties of this world….

Might be chance of Corporate Cobras roaming around...

We can’t even breathe the fresh air...

Might be toxic gases filling our lungs!!!!

Our secrecies are not safe even in our closed closets…

Might be satellite cameras swapping our naked selves...

Still we are saying that we are civilized race.

Still we are claiming that we are progressing race...

But where we reached… is an Utopian peak...

43 comments:

Shrinky said...

A passionate cry in the wilderness! Bleak, harsh, but yet, oh so sadly true. Bravo, my friend.

Cami said...

That's beautiful. In it's sadness, there is a lot of perception and beauty. We cannot, after all, reap joy without sadness. Thank you for your insight. :-)

Joy Palakkal said...

Shrinky..
Thanks for your visit and assessing comment..
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Joy Palakkal said...

Cami..
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Adam White - Poet said...

Beautiful words. That's for visiting my site. If you hadn't, I never would have found you. I'll add a link to your group if you add a link to mine. I've been open only a few days and get alot of visits through facebook, so if you want some more traffic it's the way forward!

I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

Joy Palakkal said...

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Hamid said...

peace be upon you.Nice to come here.

Hamid said...

good words.nicely written

Joy Palakkal said...

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Reader Wil said...

Your poem creates a feeling of sadness as if everything is idle and good for nothing.I don't think that everything is so hopeless and desolate. There is beauty in a small flower, a lonely star, a smile and a tear, a hello and a waving hand.
Thanks for sharing this poem! Thanks also for your visit!

WarmSunshine said...

Hi!

Hmmm nice one, but I'd like to look at it from another view. There's hope for every thing. God hasn't given up on us yet :)

Thanks for the visit.

David C Brown said...

Sadly - very true.

Kraxpelax said...

The Moon
shines
on a cat

Meow

As a native Swede, I am particularly proud of my love poetry suite Sonnets for Katie.

My Poems

My wallpaper art Babes!

Sexuality introduces Death to Being; and indeed Life simultaneously. This is the profound Myth of the Eden. The work of the Serpent. Bringing us out of "blessed" Standstill. So, in contrast to the mindless pietism of vulgar Christianity, my personal "Christo-Satanism" should be given serious thought by the Enlightened Few, the Pneumatics, the 1% Outlaws. The Light Bringer must be rehabilitated, beacause if not, the All of it simply doesn't make sense: true Catholicism is necessarily Meta Catholicism.

My philosophy

Arthur Rimbaud, Max Jacob, Saint-John Perse, René Char, Henri Michaux, Roger Kowalski, Peter Ingestad...

LE FRUIT DU CIEL

Un orage nocturne illmuna maintenant l'Amazonie, franchis les Andes, envoya des jeux de cartes gigantesques et frappantes en bas à la Pampa –

Puis: petit déjeuner à melon; café fumant!

À la bague du cigare tu lis, étonné: GÉOGRAPHIE.

My prosepoetry in French:

Poétudes

Schwarzes Birne!
Aufforderung zur Erotik.

My poetry in German:

Fremde Gedichte

And, finally, I practise I Ching divination:

? I CHING !

And: reciprocity: for mutual benefit, you will do me a favor promoting your own blog on mine!

The best way to do it is lining up as a Follower, since then your icon will advertise you indefinitely, and I will follow you in return. Let's forge a mighty alliance of synergy and common interest.

Yours,

- Peter Ingestad, Sweden

Kraxpelax said...

The Moon
shines
on a cat

Meow

---

SLEEPLESS IN SEATTLE

There's much in the world that you can't explain.
It's revealed for you to remember
by the whispering voice of a distant train
or a midnight rain in november.

Horizon within! You can always find
the keys to Enigma. Let's mention
one basic Truth: of spirited Mind
Is Nature naught but extension.

Internal expanses! In dreams, ridden
by fear and longing you roam
that deep Southeast in your soul hidden
...on your random journey back home.

---

As a native Swede, I am particularly proud of my love poetry suite Sonnets for Katie.

My Poems

My wallpaper art Babes!

Sexuality introduces Death to Being; and indeed Life simultaneously. This is the profound Myth of the Eden. The work of the Serpent. Bringing us out of "blessed" Standstill. So, in contrast to the mindless pietism of vulgar Christianity, my personal "Christo-Satanism" should be given serious thought by the Enlightened Few, the Pneumatics, the 1% Outlaws. The Light Bringer must be rehabilitated, beacause if not, the All of it simply doesn't make sense: true Catholicism is necessarily Meta Catholicism.

My philosophy

Arthur Rimbaud, Max Jacob, Saint-John Perse, René Char, Henri Michaux, Roger Kowalski, Peter Ingestad...

LE FRUIT DU CIEL

Un orage nocturne illmuna maintenant l'Amazonie, franchis les Andes, envoya des jeux de cartes gigantesques et frappantes en bas à la Pampa –

Puis: petit déjeuner à melon; café fumant!

À la bague du cigare tu lis, étonné: GÉOGRAPHIE.

My prosepoetry in French:

Poétudes

Et je traduise la poésie française en suédois:

Ordgaller

Schwarzes Birne!
Aufforderung zur Erotik.

My poetry in German:

Fremde Gedichte

Casualidad sopla la sangre
de alguno señor desconocido
durante los pocos restantes
momentos del resplandor de faroles

que se vislumbran tras el follaje
flameando de las obsesiónes
igual efimero como gotas
del cinzano de la soledad –

En aquel tiempo me levanta
dentro uno incidente avejentado
que en seguida palidece
al camouflaje de abstraccion;

chica, nadie conoce que tus grisos
ojos significan aún; con todo
el sueño que hube evacuado
tu escudriñas nuevamente.

Mi poesía aproximadamente española

And: reciprocity: for mutual benefit, you will do me a favor promoting your own blog on mine!

The best way to do it is lining up as a Follower, since then your icon will advertise you indefinitely, and I will follow you in return. Let's forge a mighty alliance of synergy and common interest.

Yours,

- Peter Ingestad, Sweden

Parapluie said...

"Where the human races are perishing with fatal diseases Democracies growing purely out of public needs.....For World Peace we are brutally killing innocent children." I am mulling over these two in particular and guess at specifics. I am not happy with the state of the humankind either.
Thank you for visiting my blog.

Sabi Sunshine said...

wow amazing post.. Wish u and your family a very happy diwali & prosperous new year. May God fulfill all your wishes in wealth, health & happiness in your life.

Have a beautiful Day!

Love
Sabi Sunshine

Kraxpelax said...

There's much in the world that you can't explain.
It's revealed for you to remember
by the whispering voice of a distant train
or a midnight rain in november.

Horizon within! You can always find
the keys to Enigma. Let's mention
one basic Truth: of spirited Mind
Is Nature naught but extension.

Internal expanses! In dreams, ridden
by fear and longing you roam
that deep Southeast in your soul hidden
...on your random journey back home.

Single Swingle

Haddock said...

Religions are going away from fundamental truth…

Still we are claiming that we are developing race!!!
...... so true.

Anna said...

Well written again!
Happy holidays my friend, and hope to see more of your posts.
Anna :)

Aary said...

well written sir..

Anya said...

Happy New Year!!
We wish you a joyful life
full of healthy, happiness and pleasure :)

Hugs Love Anya

Kareltje =^.^=

Betsie =(^.^)=

indu said...

Faces ,mere illusions of disguised reality

Words ,expressions of hypocritical intonations...

Body ,the pretension of doomed faith...

Ideas, linking with selfish thoughts only!!

Promises ,from a simple magic oven...

frying up real needs!!

yes , hollow men…we really are

Still claiming
we are a developing race!!

Sannuuu...! said...

good hand Joy...excellent.

Meera's World said...

'Our secrecies are not safe even in our closed closets…

Might be satellite cameras swapping our naked selves...'

How true!!

Joy Palakkal said...

Reader wil..
I am also not thinking that whole world is so hopeless...
In this poem i just try to express the negative side of world..
i am also enjoying the beauty of this world,even in small flower ,a lonely star, a smile and a tear, a hello and a waving hand...

i am so happy to read your detailed comment.and expecting more in future also.

Thanks for your first vist and creative comment.

expecting more and more visits..

Joy Palakkal said...

Warm sunshine..

Thanks for your first visit and the creative comment you put forward.

expecting more visits and creative comments from you in future also.

Joy Palakkal said...

Kraxpelax...

Hearty Welcome to Palakkal arena.
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Joy Palakkal said...

Sabi sunshine...

Thanks for your visit and warm diwali and new year wishes..

appreciating the creative comment.

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Joy Palakkal said...

Parapulie..

Hearty Welcome to My blog.
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Joy Palakkal said...

Haddock..
Thanks for your first visit and assessing comment..
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Joy Palakkal said...

Anna..
Thanks my friend for your visit and the holiday wishes.....
come again..

Joy Palakkal said...

Aary..

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Joy Palakkal said...

Anya...

Hearty welcome to my English blog!!

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Joy Palakkal said...

Indu..

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Joy Palakkal said...

Sannuuu..


Thanks for your first visit and the creative comment you put forward.

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Joy Palakkal said...

Meera's World..

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His Path Through The Wilderness said...

Love this line "Faces are mere illusions of disguised reality."

Really all of it is very good!

Satheesh Haripad said...

"Religions are going away from fundamental truth…"
Well written.

Joy Palakkal said...

His Path Through The Wilderness..
Thanks for your visit and the appreciation you marked..
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Have a Great Time ahead!!

Joy Palakkal said...

Satheesh Haripad..
The present Era really depicting this bitter Truth!!!

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Rajasree Narayanan said...

Express ur feelings in Malayalam some times please..

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ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം Muralee Mukundan said...

We proudly discovered water in cosmic bodies...

But not enough water for thirsty human race

We are exploding the mysteries of unwanted technologies