Monday, April 18, 2011

Savage spring!!!

It was an exciting spring season…

Morning glories were smiling around..

Refreshing breeze humming the melodious notes…

Robins were chirping over the flowery branches..

Red roses spreading the lovely fragrance.. was a morning of yielding Love!!! was an exciting spring season!!! was an exciting spring season!!!

She was waiting for her sweet heart…

She was waiting for her secret Love…

The sun was shining like her thrilling heart..

The restless fingers rubbing her lovely chin... last the meadow flowered with his inspiring smile!!!

Her lovely face blushed like a fresh red rose..

Oh was the blooming moment of tender Love!!!

Oh.. it was the marvelous moment of amazing Love!!

His restless lips uttering her sweet name..

His courageous love hugging her throbbing heart..

His shivering fingers were fondling her lovely hairs

His whispers uttering the frantic Love..

Oh was the splendor real Love!!

Oh.. it was a morning of overflowing Love!!

Oh.. it was a morning of alluring Love!!

Oh it was savage spring season..

Savage savage spring season..

Police whistles overruled the lovely garden solace...

City petrol tackled him with their vigilant eyes..

Oh ..he was a notorious killer by profession..

Oh.. it was a strange strange love affair.

Oh .. it was a savage savage love affair..

Oh it was strange spring season …

Savage savage spring season!!!

Savage savage spring season!!!


Unknown said...


Shrinky said...

OMG, I never saw THAT coming!! Wow, how chillingly clever of you. Bravo!

Debra said...

The build-up and then the conclusion of this poem is very interesting! Very clever!

ജോയ്‌ പാലക്കല്‍ - Joy Palakkal said...


ആദ്യമായി പാലക്കല്‍ ജാലകത്തിലേയ്ക്കു സ്വാഗതം!!

സന്ദര്‍ശനത്തിനും, അഭിപ്രായത്തിനും നന്ദി..
ഇനിയും വരിക..വിലയേറിയ അഭിപ്രായങ്ങള്‍ രേഖപ്പെടുത്തുക.

Anya said...

Happy Weekend or
Happy Easter to all from
Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<
Anya :)



Unknown said...

I read your writing. It's fun. the spring's coming in Korea.

J. Martha said...

Nice work Joy Ji,
all the best for you :)

myonlyphoto said...

Joy I did not expect to end like this, excellent twist.

Anna :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Thanks for your visit..
And the creative comment.
Have a nice day!!

Sabi Sunshine said...

Cool post.. loved it ...

Sabi Sunshine

ഷൈജു.എ.എച്ച് said...

really nice and great. its a very strange spring season..
i like it ... best wishes

myonlyphoto said...

Just dropped by to say hi!
Hope all is well, hopefully we can see more of your writing. Anna :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Debra W...

Thanks for your visit..
and the appreciation.
Come again and mark your creative notes.

Joy Palakkal said...

Anya ..

Thanks for the visit..

Wish you all a great Time!!

Do visit again..

Joy Palakkal said...

Chris heo..
Welcome to Palakkal Arena...
Thanks for your visit..
Do visit again..
Have a great Time ahead..

Joy Palakkal said...


Thanks a lot for your appreciation..
Come again and mark your appreciation..

Joy Palakkal said...

Thank you very much for your two visits..
Really appreciating your creative notes!!
Do visit again.

Joy Palakkal said...

Sabi sunshine..

Thanks for your visit and appreciation!!

Happy to that you my poem..
Do visit again..
Have a Nice Time!!!

Joy Palakkal said...


Welcome to Palakkal Arena.

Thanks for your visit and creative comment..
Come again and mark your appreciation again.

alexander said...

ആംഗലേയ സാഹിത്യം എനിക്ക് വല്യ വശമില്ല, എന്നാലും ഒരു lover -എ killer ആക്കേണ്ടായിരുന്നു.
പ്രണയിക്കുന്നവന് കൊലപാതകിയാവാനാവുമോ ?..
anyway, April to October is a long gap..expecting a "loving thriller" which is filling the gap..
warm wishes..

myonlyphoto said...

Joy wishing you happy new year. Hope you will be back blogging again. Anna :)

Joy Palakkal said...

Yes Alexander,a killer can also love!!
Thanks for your visit and comment.
Yes you are true..a long Gap!!
I am trying to come back.
Come again..

Joy Palakkal said...

Thanks for your visit again..
Yeah I am a kind of moody away from creativity...trying to come back..
Thanks for your encouragement..
Convey my regards to Little Matthew!! Have a Nice time.

Meera's World said...

i was enjoying it thoroughly until i reached the end of it:(:(

Joy Palakkal said...

Meera's World..
Thanks for your visit and appreciation...
Always Welcome to Palakkal Arena!!

AmadeeKay said...

Wow, this was very good! Also, I would like to thank you for reading my blog. It means a lot!

Joy Palakkal said...

Thanks for your visit and appreciation...
Welcome to Palakkal Arena always...

Joy Palakkal said...

Thanks for your visit and appreciation...
Welcome to Palakkal Arena always...

Muralee Mukundan , ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം said...

പാലപ്പൂവിന്റൊപ്പം യക്ഷിയുമുണ്ടോ അവിടെ..?

Aary said...

Loved it :)